I haven't been feeling the best over the past few days and haven't been in a writing mood. Funny enough, that seemed to happen right after I wrote I been in nothing but a writing mood. My progress has slowed and this is usually the hardest time for me as a writer. I start to question my story and chapters. Are they good? Should there be more of this and more of that? Why will anyone care?
I have also thought that my prolouge leaves something to be desired. Yes I have an event at the end that sets up further storylines, but it doesn't quite set up the main story. I think I also un intentionally answered the mystery in the fifth chapter.
My chapters for the most part have been 2000 words. That is a decent sized chapter, but I feel that having them the same length and also have so much happen in such a short time, that I am missing out on the most important aspects of the story and that is building the characters and strengthing their bonds. This is something I really need to work at. Also, after reading the first 8 chapters back to back, so much happens. I have enough content for an entire novel here, but have condensed it down to 15,000 words. If I had to pick a main weakness when it comes to writing, it would be my pacing. I have lots of action and that is fine, but I lack in so many other areas. A novel is not all action, it has to be many things. Characters, Dialogue, Scenes. Another weakness, if I had to put it out there, would be my descriptions. I enjoy books, but sometimes find myself scanning the description and not fully taking them in. I need to resolve to pay more attention to them and note how they are constructed.
Previously, my dialogue had been my weakest point, but I think I have really improved upon this, though some it still appears wooded, this can be fixed during the editing process. In the end, I am going to see this through, but I always seem to do this to my self. I set my expectations to high as I hate to disappoint.
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